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I screamed with all my might.  Desperately trying to save my life, I admitted my connection with the devil.  Yet, my lips could only speak muffled words to the world up above.  There’s no use in trying to break from iron weights.  I die with innocence in my watery grave.

~jolt~
:iconlighting-jolt:

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I wanted to try micro-fiction......it's 50 words!!:) oh and I'm going to start putting jolt on my stuff. It's my copyright and I give :iconwriters-workshop: permission to display this. (sorry it's not 500 words but I didn't read hehehe. I just looked at the news letter and not the comments either.oops)

it's based on the salem witch trials...hope you like it.

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:iconcrawlerkat:
DUDE, that's actually quite a powerful set of words there. Something about it is just... I don't know. Striking, I suppose.

Man, if only I weren't so busy... I wouldn't mind creating an art to go along with this for Bluefish >...< WHY COULDN'T YOU HAVE COME UP WITH THIS EARLIER!?

[hehe and see? I will comment on your stuff everyone once in a while X3]

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"Wait, he said. Do I look like a waiter?" ~Kefka
:iconlighting-jolt:
thanks...I should make my oct entries 50 words.


well, the writer's workshop made a mistake it needs to be 500 not 50 words. So, I need to add more. (which with other projects at hand I may not get to it)

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The greatest thing you’ll ever learn is just to love and be loved in return.
:icondarlingallie:
jeeze some one read the crucible!!!

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I want to see raw emotion. emotion you don't get by getting drunk or high. emotion that comes when you are truly pissed. Emotion that comes and then doesn't make you feel like shit afterwords.
:iconlighting-jolt:
lol but they don't have proof by sinking in the crucible so I did it.....muhahaha

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The greatest thing you’ll ever learn is just to love and be loved in return.
:iconcrawlerkat:
XD You can try, but I don't know how well you'd do

But if I drew a companion art piece, they could share a page/I could incorperate it into my art and thus be fine with just 50 words X3

So, there. We have a plan for next year-- art/writing collab!

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"Wait, he said. Do I look like a waiter?" ~Kefka
:iconbrytning:
I just read the Crucible, haha. This is a powerful statement in its brevity.

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"To refuse awards is another way of accepting them with more noise than is normal."
- Peter Ustinov
:iconlighting-jolt:
why thank you.....:)

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The greatest thing you’ll ever learn is just to love and be loved in return.

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